Needing feedback on vocal WIP

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    I’m trying to complete the vocals on a previous custom of the Foo Fighter’s “Something from Nothing”. I had my initial try looked at by Nyxyxylyth and he gave me some great advice! This is my second go around and I’m looking for some more advice.

     

    I don’t have it uploaded to mediafire, but can provide zip files.

     

    Any help is appreciated.

    #433667

    removed because it’s DLC now -pksage

     

    Included link to the project.

    #433740
    Nyxyxylyth
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      It looks like you took your original project and copypasted with mine, so most of the tracks are doubled.

       

      The pitches and tube timing from 14.3 onwards are way off. Did you post the right version? The filename is rpp-bak, which is usually the backup (previous) file.

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      Sorry about that. Fixed the post with the link to include the right file.

      #433817
      Nyxyxylyth
      Participant

        Serious issues with pitch.

         

        You’ve got:

        Sing-(A) ing(Bb) a-(G#) long(A) +(Bb) the(A) ar-(G#) son-(F) ist(F#) choir(G) +(F#)

         

        Should be:

        Sing-(G) ing(E) a-(G) long(A) +(:cool: the(E) ar-(G) son-(E) ist(G) choir(A) +(E)

         

        Note that the -ing in “singing” goes *down*, not *up* – if your ear can’t discern relative pitch, you might need a lot more practice before you take on vocal charting.

         

        Tube placement still needs work. For example, “nist” should begin 2/64 earlier, and be 4/64 long, cutting off the “s” sound at the end. Using scrub mode is a must to place vocal tubes correctly. A more severe example is at 32.3: “string” should be a single (A) tube, starting 5/64 later at 32.3.87, and extending 7/64 later to 32.4.68.

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