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If you plan on showing these films anywhere where you stand to make money, you cannot use Rock Band, especially anything that resembles gameplay unless you get explicit consent from Harmonix. It leaves you open to getting sued, if not by Harmonix themselves, a parent company.
If you plan on showing these films anywhere where you stand to make money, you cannot use Rock Band, especially anything that resembles gameplay unless you get explicit consent from Harmonix. It leaves you open to getting sued, if not by Harmonix themselves, a parent company.Then make the movie free!
NOTF is already 100% written and ready to film after ATR wraps up. I may post some of the script for NOTF when I get home.
Just in case you’re wondering, I’m not trying to discourage you or be negative, but I myself am a filmmaker with a degree from the most prestigious film program in Canada, where we were taught not only the craft, theory, and history, of filmmaking, but the business side too, and I’m just trying to help you look out for your best interests. That said, if you have any questions about dos and don’ts in regards to what’s ok to show, or any other thing about film and technique, feel free to ask.
” src=”/wp-content/uploads/invision_emoticons/default_SA_smile.gif” />@K-Mac: Thanks
” src=”/wp-content/uploads/invision_emoticons/default_SA_smile.gif” /> I always appreciate help from a fellow filmmaker.Now a few little teases
Firstly, some very cheaply made posters:
Now for some actual dialogue!
Remember this movie is satire. The dialogue is supposed to be very cheesy, with a 70s feel to it.
Jenny and Vinny
JENNY
Vinny what do you like most about our relationship?
VINNY
What the fuck kind of question is that? I don’t know.
JENNY
There’s gotta be something about it you like.
Vinny thinks for minute.
VINNY
It’s kind of cool that our names rhyme i guess.
JENNY (angry)
Seriously? We’ve been together six months and our fucking names rhyming is what you like the most?
VINNY
Well that and your great ass.
JENNY
You’re fucking pig Vinny.
She dumps a glass of water on him. He stands up
VINNY (shouting)
What the fucking fuck was that? I gave you a compliment bitch!
JENNY
Fuck off Vinny. That wasn’t a compliment. That was you being a fucking pig. Just get the fuck out.
VINNY
Well for Christ’s sake Jenny i guess i fucking will.
Vinny opens the door and leaves. The camera pans out showing a fox watching him.
First encounter with the fox
A scream is head off screen.
STAN
For fuck’s sake Vinny i’m trying to enjoy this movie..
He gets up and walks out the door.
INT. STAN’S YARD
The fox is on top of Vinny attacking him.
VINNY
Oh my god what the fuck!? STOP!
Stan appears.
STAN
Christ Vinny what the fuck are you screaming about?
Stan sees the fox.
STAN
What the fuck?! Shit! Vinny hold on! wait here!
VINNY
I don’t have a fucking choice about waiting asshole!
STAN
Don’t worry i’m gonna help you!
VINNY
Then get the fuck back here! Damn!
STAN
Hold on!
INT. PARKTON’S RESIDENCE
Stan runs back into the house and heads for the closet. He opens the closet door and grabs a gun.
STAN
Finally i get to shoot something!
He pumps the shotgun/
INT. STAN’S YARD
Stan comes back with the shotgun.
VINNY
Oh fuck.. You gonna kill me before this fuckin’ bastard does!?
STAN
I’m not aiming at you dumbass!
STAN’S POV
We see through that part of the gun that aims. The aim is at the fox’s spine. Stan pulls the trigger.
EXIT POV
We see the bullet shoot into the fox’s spine, spreading blood all over.
VINNY
Holy fuck. What the fuck was that thing?
STAN
Well it sure looks like a fox to me.
VINNY
Not what i meant asshole.
STAN
Let’s just go back inside. I know you almost got killed and all, but i don’t wanna miss my movie.
VINNY
Fuck off Stan.
STAN
You’re just lucky there was a commercial on.
Stan runs into his ex
Stan is outside the gas station. He sees girl across the street. This is his ex-girlfriend, Kelly Syntacks.
STAN
Kelly! Whats up?
KELLY
Stan! It’s good to see you. How have you been?
STAN
Not so good. Everyone is dead.
KELLY
What the fuck!? How?
STAN
You won’t believe me.
KELLY
I’ll believe you. Promise.
STAN
Alright. But only because you have hot sexy tits.
KELLY
Really are my tits all you care about?
STAN
Well they areee pretty nice..
KELLY
Quit making comments about my tits! What the fuck is happening!?
STAN
Fine! There’s a fucking fox going around and killing people.
KELLY
Fuck off.
STAN
If I’m right, you have to fuck me.
KELLY
Deal! Cause that’s bullshit.
A fox appears covered in blood. Kelly screams.
STAN
Well, if i live though this at least i’m getting laid.
KELLY
Shut the fuck up and run!
They start running. The fox runs after them.
INT. POLICE STATION – PARKING LOT
Stan and Kelly run here. Stan finds the Secretary dead. He stares at her breasts. He then grabs a gun in the back.
STAN
This should help.
The fox comes. Stan whacks it with the gun. They continue running.
KELLY
Where are we going?
STAN
I think we’ll be safe at my house.
KELLY
For Sex or for hiding?
STAN
Why not both?
INT. PARKTON’S RESIDENCE – FRONT DRIVEWAY
Stan and Kelly run here. They go up to the door.
Maybe you should add a last minute scene where I make a cameo listening to Queensryche (Jet City Woman) with a nametag saying C. C. C. #5 in NOTF.
If you’ll write some quick dialog for it I will consider it.C. C. C. #5: Hey bitch! Listen to some Queensryche , it’s awesome muthafucker! (Turns on Jet City Woman)
You: Why should I bitch?!
(C. C. C. #5 starts to walk around the corner in a rage , cursing , and then screams of terror are heard and is persumbably killed by the fox)
You: *Sigh* I was going to warn that piece of shit.
Just make sure I have glasses and that I am white (Skin color) okay?
Oh , and beside Empire , several other albums can be seen…
Sweet-Desolation Boulevard
Megadeth-Countdown To Extinction
Judas Priest-British Steel
The Beatles-Please Please Me
Hope that makes for a quick scene.
MagmaOasis, one thing I’d say needs work with your script is the amount of profanity. No, I’m not saying that it’s highly offensive or anything. Fuck, I’m all for profanity in film. But when it’s this frequent, it becomes worn out, and loses all it’s meaning and weight. Usually in film, when someone uses profanity, it’s a highly emotional scene, or at least someone being grumpy. But not every sentence needs the word “fuck” in it. South Park has covered this in the episode “It Hits the Fan,” where they actually count how many times “shit” is said, and as the episode progresses people start to realize that the profanity has lost all of it’s meaning, and has become boring. I fear it’d be the same case in this film, if the current amount of profanity is kept in the final product.
What I’m trying to say is, you can have profanity, and plenty of it, but too much will make it meaningless and boring to listen to.
MagmaOasis, one thing I’d say needs work with your script is the amount of profanity. No, I’m not saying that it’s highly offensive or anything. Fuck, I’m all for profanity in film. But when it’s this frequent, it becomes worn out, and loses all it’s meaning and weight. Usually in film, when someone uses profanity, it’s a highly emotional scene, or at least someone being grumpy. But not every sentence needs the word “fuck” in it. South Park has covered this in the episode “It Hits the Fan,” where they actually count how many times “shit” is said, and as the episode progresses people start to realize that the profanity has lost all of it’s meaning, and has become boring. I fear it’d be the same case in this film, if the current amount of profanity is kept in the final product.What I’m trying to say is, you can have profanity, and plenty of it, but too much will make it meaningless and boring to listen to.
You know what…
I think the amount of profanity in this film is outrageos!
All I have to say is “outrageos” amounts of cussing can work
The AVGN movie also comes to mind as it’s the most recent I’ve seen to go that far with profanity.
Just saying it can fucking work
” src=”/wp-content/uploads/invision_emoticons/default_SA_biggrin.gif” />All I have to say is “outrageos” amounts of cussing can workThe AVGN movie also comes to mind as it’s the most recent I’ve seen to go that far with profanity.
Just saying it can fucking work
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Also , in the scene above , as I walk away angrily , Pink Floyd’s Another Brick In The Wall Pt. 2 should be playing.
All I have to say is “outrageos” amounts of cussing can workThe AVGN movie also comes to mind as it’s the most recent I’ve seen to go that far with profanity.
Just saying it can fucking work
” src=”/wp-content/uploads/invision_emoticons/default_SA_biggrin.gif” />In the context of a gangster movie such as Pulp Fiction, I can sort of understand, since these are grown, dirty men who essentially kill for a living; they’re expected to be foul in every sense of the word. But to me, the way the profanity is written for this horror/comedy involving college-age folk who’s biggest sin is being a bit obsessed with women’s biology (as is the case with the one guy, it seems), it seems it was written for the sole purpose of having profanity in there. That may not be the case; I don’t know the characters enough to tell if this all makes sense with the characters or if this is some attempt at “edginess.” But I’m thinking in context with the scenes posted by MagmaOasis, it doesn’t really work.
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