Cool thanks for the feedback!
I’ll go through the vocals and keep an ear out for slides. Still not entirely sure how to author note durations, leaving out consonants, etc.
As far as harmonies, there are only a couple points in the song that have layered vocals (maybe just that end part)…is it worth authoring them? I mean, is anyone going to play the harmony part just for a little bit of singing? Or does the secondary singer just sing the main part and then split to the harmony when it appears? Either way, splitting it out kind of sucks in that a solo singer wouldn’t get to do the “do do do do” parts.
Didn’t realize there was a sustain-gap requirement, I’ll clean that up.
I’ll also do another drum pass trying to listen closely for open hi-hats.