Triage pass: This is intended to give you some quick feedback, and give potential sponsors an idea of how much work it would take to make this a C3 release. If nobody picks it up by September 26, please release it in your own Other Customs thread.

GUITAR

8.3.50 YG not RG

14.1.50, 14.2 BY not BR (same progression as M12)

M27.3 this Y G R B sounds more like G R B Y (also 31.3, etc)

38.3 YR not BR

40.2.50 still YR

41.4.50 OY not OB

50.3 YR YO not YB YO (done correctly at 54.3)

68.4.50 GR GR GR GY GY then 69.4.50 RY is OK

76.4.50 3 quick chords here

80.2.50 these 3 are still YB

82.2.50 YO O not YO Y

83.2.75 start at 83.3 instead

85.1.50 i think there’s another strum here (also 85.3.50)

86.1.50 GR not GY

90.4 missing maybe RY GR

103.1.50 i think these 5 go RY RB RY RY RB

106.1.50 these 4 are same as 105.1.50

111 in this whole solo section you’ve got something like GR B R Y, but the pitch is descending – it feels more like YB B Y R G to me

BASS

5.4.50 this O is actually G – he does that early note thing quite often

6.3.50 ascending bass – not charted

30.2.50 The ascending pattern begins here

(these 3 issues continue throughout)

VOCALS

Tube length isn’t correct. You should be using scrub mode to see where syllables start and end. Syllables should be aligned to a 1/64 grid. Details on the first few phrases:

19.1.06 Gold ends here

19.3.12 slave ends here

20.1.31 cot- ends here

20.2 ton ends here

23.1.18 Scarred trails off – end it here

23.2.50 slav-(E) not ©

23.3.12 slav- trails off – end it here

23.3.37 er should begin here

24.2 all should end here

24.3.31 right(E) not (D)

25.4 en© just(E) a-(Bb) round© mid-© night(A) +(G)

DRUMS

seemed okay

OVERALL:

A 7/10 isn’t quite fair – guitar will be okay with those fixes. Maybe a 7.5.