Kloporte’s Show Floor submissions

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  • #390866
    Kloporte
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      Song pulled, please delete the thread <img decoding=” src=”/wp-content/uploads/invision_emoticons/default_SA_wink.gif” />

      #428037
      Nyxyxylyth
      Participant

        Triage pass: this is intended to give you some quick feedback, and give potential authors an idea of how much work is required to make the song a C3 release. If no author picks up the song by September 26, please pull the song from the Show Floor and release it in your own Other Customs thread.

         

        TEMPO MAP:

        7.955s should be a downbeat (e.g., 6.1 instead of 5.4).

        Ideally, there should be a tempo point every measure. There are long stretches without. The offset wanders about – at 19.042s, the chart is 75 ms off.

         

        VOCALS:

        Use scrub mode to begin and end syllables at the right spots.

        The pitches are not correct.

        Lyrics shouldn’t have punctuation – especially not commas.

         

        Here’s an example of the first two phrases fixed up (mine in the foreground, yours in the background above):

        http://i.imgur.com/8DvbMSI.png

         

        I give this a 2/10 for readiness.

        #429796
        Kloporte
        Participant

          Hey,

          Thanks for the answer, I’ll release it in my customs thread in a few days. With college starting back, I probably wouldn’t have the time to fix all this if it were to be picked up anyway (especially for vocals which, as you can see, I don’t master yet). I edited my first post a while ago saying you could delete the thread, but it wasn’t noticed apparently. <img decoding=” src=”/wp-content/uploads/invision_emoticons/default_SA_wink.gif” />

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